Displaying all my work today at the crit was helpfull in making me realise what it was i needed to do. I have realised that i need to pin down my briefs and write a brief that states exactly what it is i am doing. With the live briefs i am ok, but with my self directed brief on simplicity i feel like i am going of the track abit, but if i rewrite my project statement and adjust my rationale then i should be ok.
Music in the mountains -
This brief is finished so i didn't need crited on it in the sense that i wanted questions on how to improve it, i wanted to speak to people about how i should represent it in my portfolio. I didn't no if i should photograph it or use a digital version. Most people said that digital version would be fine but i am thinking that photographing it would be nicer.
Secret blisters -
The brief is really open so i have struggled with it so far, there are no specifications for it, just a format size. I wanted to produce something that stuck to the theme of simplicity so i went to screen print to test colours and shapes.That's as far as i have got with it so far. I showed it in the crit but there was not really anything to comment on yet, but it was good to hear people say that they liked it and keep going with it - this is my most current brief so i will work on it ready for the tutorials next wk.
FMP / Keep it simple -
This is the brief that i needed crited on the most. It fits with the rationale that i set out for myself but doesn't really fit with the breif i wrote out. I said that i wanted to produce simplistic images, but instead it has come about using type and rewriting text. I have decided that what i need to do is find a book that is all about type and image and how it is received and illustrate this through type, restructure the words so that they read differently, pick out words make them bold, change the commas, make use of colours. On the other hand i will start naming simple images from anything that takes my fancy. This will be a separate brief, and one that is aimed more around one day briefs, just to keep my practice going and a quick way to produce work. For the type brief i will look at different types of information, such as bus / train timetables, poetry and literature and combine these with the the theory produced from the book i will find on type and image and how this is perceived, I could maybe Even be an essay rather than a book that my imagery becomes based around.
So the plan of action now is to write up these two separate briefs tomorrow and keep going with the type brief and start the visual brief, all the while researching book layouts and novels and this is what i ultimately want to achieve.
Interior design year book -
The feed back from this was good, we showed our logo and our layouts. I was a bit concerned that the logo ID09 wasn't clear but people seemed to get it, and when it is in context with the book think it will be clear. So far the layouts, people seemed to like them, we had some minor adjustments that needed to be made such as making the images of the students work larger. I am still not entirely happy with the layout, it still needs some work done on it but i think we just need to keep going on it.
End of year show -
Again this brief didn't really need crited on but it was good to show just so that i could see how much work i had done and see what i wanted to include in my portfolio.We also got the feedback form from the marketing team, we had some really good feedback which was encouraging so i will defiantly include it as a portfolio piece.